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Which one is worded the best way?

Postby 5alood » Fri Jan 12, 2018 11:52 am

A world where instead of a father teaching his 8 year old son how to tie his shoes or ride a bike, he is taught how to shoot a gun

A world where a father doesn’t teach his 8 year old son how to tie his own shoes or how to ride a bike, instead Its how to shoot a gun

A world where a father teaches his 8 year old son how to shoot a gun instead of how to tie his own shoes or ride a bike

A world where an 8 year old is taught how to shoot a gun instead of how to tie his shoes or ride a bike

A world where parents teach their 8 year old kids how to shoot a gun instead of how to tie his shoes or ride a bike

A world where 8 year olds arent taught how to ride a bike or tie their shoes instead its how to shoot a gun

Or if anyone has anything better?
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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby Fungamer » Fri Jan 12, 2018 12:12 pm

5alood wrote:A world where instead of a father teaching his 8 year old son how to tie his shoes or ride a bike, he is taught how to shoot a gun

A world where a father doesn’t teach his 8 year old son how to tie his own shoes or how to ride a bike, instead Its how to shoot a gun

A world where a father teaches his 8 year old son how to shoot a gun instead of how to tie his own shoes or ride a bike

A world where an 8 year old is taught how to shoot a gun instead of how to tie his shoes or ride a bike

A world where parents teach their 8 year old kids how to shoot a gun instead of how to tie his shoes or ride a bike

A world where 8 year olds arent taught how to ride a bike or tie their shoes instead its how to shoot a gun

Or if anyone has anything better?

1 & 2 seem the best.

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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby Ruler » Fri Jan 12, 2018 12:31 pm

I would go for 4 myself.

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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby Moleman » Fri Jan 12, 2018 12:52 pm

A world where an 8-year-old boy is taught how to handle a firearm, rather than learning how to ride a bike, or even tie his own shoelaces.
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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby Ruler » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:07 pm

Moleman wrote:A world where an 8-year-old boy is taught how to handle a firearm, rather than learning how to ride a bike, or even tie his own shoelaces.

Even better.

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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby 5alood » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:08 pm

Moleman wrote:A world where an 8-year-old boy is taught how to handle a firearm, rather than learning how to ride a bike, or even tie his own shoelaces.

mhm.. sounds good, thanks.
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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby Moleman » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:15 pm

5alood wrote:
Moleman wrote:A world where an 8-year-old boy is taught how to handle a firearm, rather than learning how to ride a bike, or even tie his own shoelaces.

mhm.. sounds good, thanks.

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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby 5alood » Fri Jan 12, 2018 1:44 pm

Moleman wrote:
5alood wrote:
Moleman wrote:A world where an 8-year-old boy is taught how to handle a firearm, rather than learning how to ride a bike, or even tie his own shoelaces.

mhm.. sounds good, thanks.

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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby Patel » Fri Jan 12, 2018 5:18 pm

A world where 8 year olds are taught to shoot a gun before they can tie their own shoes.
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Re: Which one is worded the best way?

Postby Slap a ho » Fri Jan 12, 2018 5:57 pm

Patel wrote:A world where 8 year olds are taught to shoot a gun before they can tie their own shoes.

Trust Patel. He’s a wizard when it comes to words.

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